that was a really great progression from the first. The way your hand interacted with the drawings was really interesting. I think that goes along with what I said of your first project, the idea of the artist being shown interacting with the art itself, and this time, you REALLY interact with it. Especially when you run your hand down the board and the lines follow. WHOAH!
Very nice touch with the hands moving the figures, that was by far my favorite part. As far as picky details go though, I'm really bothered by the line at the bottom of the screen, where I can tell this is a dry erase board of some kind. Also, the yellow bracelet is a bit problematic for me, I want to stare at it instead of the drawings. Also, the ending is a bit abrupt, maybe you could play with the idea of the hands crumpling up all of the black drawing lines and making them disappear. or something like that. Overall though, super super improvement, I love the thick black lines and the hands interacting with the figures at the end is very compelling and fun to watch.
this is a lot smoother and more interesting than your test. I think the dry erase board adds a nice aesthetic to the piece, especially the little marker particles moving around. I think your interaction with the drawing is strong and there is a good pace. Im not sure about showing the edge of the dry erase board and your bracelet, they are a little distracting. Overall, I believe this is a very successful animation.
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ReplyDeletethat was a really great progression from the first. The way your hand interacted with the drawings was really interesting. I think that goes along with what I said of your first project, the idea of the artist being shown interacting with the art itself, and this time, you REALLY interact with it. Especially when you run your hand down the board and the lines follow. WHOAH!
Very nice touch with the hands moving the figures, that was by far my favorite part. As far as picky details go though, I'm really bothered by the line at the bottom of the screen, where I can tell this is a dry erase board of some kind. Also, the yellow bracelet is a bit problematic for me, I want to stare at it instead of the drawings. Also, the ending is a bit abrupt, maybe you could play with the idea of the hands crumpling up all of the black drawing lines and making them disappear. or something like that. Overall though, super super improvement, I love the thick black lines and the hands interacting with the figures at the end is very compelling and fun to watch.
ReplyDeletethis is a lot smoother and more interesting than your test. I think the dry erase board adds a nice aesthetic to the piece, especially the little marker particles moving around. I think your interaction with the drawing is strong and there is a good pace. Im not sure about showing the edge of the dry erase board and your bracelet, they are a little distracting. Overall, I believe this is a very successful animation.
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