The lines traveling across the picture plane are really good, this whole thing is a great formal experiment. I really like the addition of the blackness overwhelming the frame and stopping right around one of the spheres. I think it would be nice if that were a transition into a new realm of the piece, rather than an end to it. I see a lot of possibilities for great places for this to go. work on getting them there!
The lines traveling across the picture plane are really good, this whole thing is a great formal experiment. I really like the addition of the blackness overwhelming the frame and stopping right around one of the spheres. I think it would be nice if that were a transition into a new realm of the piece, rather than an end to it. I see a lot of possibilities for great places for this to go. work on getting them there!
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